Echoing 
              Silence:  
              Thomas Merton on the Vocation of Writing 
              edited by Robert Inchausti 
              New Seeds, 2007
            Tom 
              Merton:  
              A Personal Biography 
              by Joan C. McDonald 
              Marquette University Press, 2007 
            review 
              by Jon 
              M. Sweeney 
            In 
              his monumental biography, The Seven Mountains of Thomas Merton 
              (1984), Michael Mott set the standard for every other study 
              of the life and work of the most important teacher of monastic spirituality 
              of the twentieth century. A poet and novelist himself, Mott was 
              able to comment with insight on the struggle that plagued Merton 
              for his entire converted life: how to balance his passion for religious 
              life with his overrunning talent as a writer.  
            In 
              the summer of 1941, a few months before he joined the Trappist monastery 
              in Kentucky that he would make famous with his writing, Thomas Merton 
              was living in upstate New York, teaching English at St. Bonaventure 
              College. He was in his twenties and trying to figure out what to 
              do with his life, attracted as he was to both the life of the mind 
              (as a writer) and the life of the spirit (a possible, religious 
              vocation). Mott records, 
             
               
                [H]e sharpened the focus of a number of debates with himself 
                that would last a lifetime…. He debated whether or not he 
                was a writer…. Then he went on to question whether his writing 
                honored God, or whether it was simply a celebration of self. He 
                was still wondering this in his journals of the 1960s. 
             
            It 
              is this tension that has made Merton’s life and work relevant 
              to millions of readers, long after his death in 1968. Many 
              of us, like Merton, bump up against these same questions—not 
              necessarily because we are writers, as he was, but because we seek 
              to exercise our talents without self-aggrandizement. 
              To use the language of monastic spirituality, how do we dismantle 
              our “false self,” and gradually discover our “true 
              self,” as we succeed in our work in the world? This question 
              filled Merton with anxiety throughout his life. 
            His 
              autobiography was published when Merton was only thirty-three years 
              old. He found it nearly impossible not to write about what was happening 
              inside of him in his first years as a cloistered monk. During his 
              first visit as a retreatant to the Abbey of Gethsemani in Kentucky, 
              during Holy Week of 1941, he wrote in his journal, “I should 
              tear out all the other pages of this book and all the other pages 
              of everything else I ever wrote, and begin here.”  
            In 
              the years to follow, after hundreds of thousands of copies of The 
              Seven Storey Mountain were purchased and read around the world, 
              Merton would go through times when he wanted to stop writing altogether. 
              These were times when he felt his ego growing faster than his spirit. 
              But, thank God, they were short-lived, and he went back to his typewriter. 
            Echoing 
              Silence, ably compiled and annotated by Robert Inchausti, is 
              the first book to chronicle the tension of Merton’s split 
              vocation. This is a book of Merton’s writings on writing, 
              and in that sense, it will appeal most of all to other writers. 
              However, Inchausti uncovers the essence of 
              Merton’s genius, as well—the reason why Merton’s 
              writings themselves will outlive those of most any other spiritual 
              writer of the twentieth century. I have probably 
              never encountered a better summary than this one from Inchausti 
              at the end of his Introduction:  
             
              Thomas 
                Merton brought contemplation into the twentieth century, divesting 
                it of its antique scholasticism and ancient prejudices: making 
                it efficient far beyond the inner circle of Christian initiates. 
                He retained the best that was thought and said within the monastic 
                counter culture—preserving its traditions while broadening 
                its appeal and bringing it into dialogue with the contemporary 
                world. 
             
            Echoing 
              Silence is arranged topically, rather than chronologically. 
              It includes chapters of selections from Merton’s books, journals, 
              and letters on subjects such as writing as a spiritual calling, 
              poetry, thoughts on other writers, and advice given to other writers. 
              It was uncanny how close to the center of the literary world Merton 
              sat, despite being behind a monastic enclosure in Kentucky. In fact, 
              for those interested in his almost daily letters to other, prominent 
              writers during the 1960s, I highly recommend The Courage for 
              Truth: The Letters of Thomas Merton to Writers, published more 
              than a decade ago and still available in paperback.  
            I wished 
              that Echoing Silence had included more of the remarkable 
              back-and-forth exchanges that Merton had with people like Czeslaw 
              Milosz, Boris Pasternak, James Baldwin, Henry Miller, Walker Percy, 
              and others. Nevertheless, the selection and breadth of Echoing Silence 
              is admirable, and will be useful for writers and other artists, 
              in college classrooms, and for those interested in a close look 
              at Merton’s lifelong vocational crisis as a writer. 
            Joan 
              McDonald’s Tom Merton also attempts to uncover new 
              insights into Merton’s life and writing, through the genre 
              of biography. She tries adding to what we already 
              know—from much better biographies such as Michael Mott’s—by 
              inventing internal dialogs for Merton, putting words into his mind 
              and mouth. She explains this controversial technique in a note to 
              the reader at the outset: “I have extrapolated the events 
              of Merton’s life at certain key times by insertion of dialogue 
              and self-analysis in italicized passages, which is purely the result 
              of my imagination.”  
            Sometimes 
              these dialogs are, in fact, set in italics, and at other times, 
              they appear in quotemarks. Still other times—toward the end 
              of the book—they appear in neither italics nor quotes, and 
              that’s when it gets really confusing. This confusion is most 
              likely the result of poor or no proofreading, which Tom Merton sorely 
              needed.  
            Only 
              on a couple of occasions did I find these self-analysis dialogs 
              at all helpful, rather than intrusive. For instance, I appreciated 
              the twelve simple, prayerful sentences that McDonald imagined Merton 
              was thinking as he lay prostrate before the archbishop at his priestly 
              ordination. They include these lines: 
             
              “I 
                told myself God Himself looked down on me at the moment I spoke 
                my vows and accepted me as His servant. I felt a peace I never 
                knew. I began to realize that this wasn’t the end I had 
                been seeking. Rather, it was a beginning on a whole new plane 
                of experience. I had now arrived at the center of all existence. 
             
            But 
              on the whole, these internal dialogs make Tom Merton not 
              only a confusing book, but perhaps, a book that does violence to 
              our understanding of him. By Book Three (just after the midway point), 
              McDonald begins a chapter with standard biographical detail, only 
              to begin the next paragraph having switched from the third person 
              “he” for describing Merton, to the third person personal, 
              “I,” as if she is speaking his very thoughts.  
            I will, 
              however, recommend McDonald’s effort simply for the illustrations 
              that she has compiled and added to her text. Many of these are valuable 
              to the Merton enthusiast, such as the drawings showing the architecture 
              of a typical Cistercian abbey, followed by a computer-generated 
              reconstruction of what the monastery of Cluny probably looked like 
              in the eleventh century.  
            Also, 
              there are photographs of the famous downtown street corner (4th 
              and Walnut, which has since been renamed 4th and Muhammad Ali) where 
              Merton experienced an epiphany of loving all humankind. And, it 
              was fun to see the cover of The Critic, a Catholic magazine, 
              from December 1965, which pictured “The 15 Most Important 
              Catholics in the U.S.A.” including William F. Buckley, Robert 
              Kennedy, Jacqueline Kennedy, Mayor Richard J. Daley, Dorothy Day, 
              and of course, our Merton. 
               
               
            
            Copyright 
              ©2007 Jon M. Sweeney 
              
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